乐乐 发表于 2013-12-12 17:50:41

【每日改写练习】2013.12.12

本帖最后由 乐乐 于 2013-12-12 18:00 编辑

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How to choose your right shower basket

When choosing shower baskets there are many to choose from and the prices are all different, it depends where you purchase the products. For instance, you can purchase cheap baskets at local stores, or perhaps find the baskets online.

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1. 简易改写版（几乎不需要英语基础。。。）Whenever selecting shower baskets generally there are plenty to select from plus the prices tend to be all different, it will depend on exactly where you buy the products. For instance, one can buy cheap baskets at local stores or maybe choose the baskets online.2. 中级改写版（结合乐乐改21改点以及口诀）When people choose shower baskets, they will find they have many choices with different prices which is depended on where they purchase the products. For instance, there are cheap baskets at local stores or some other baskets online.3. 高级改写版（结合改写分析工具结果，自由发挥）Where to buy the best shower baskets? At local stores where you can purchase cheap baskets or purchase them online where there are many with different prices to choose from. Well, keep reading, we will help you find your answer.通过copyscape检测




dylan 发表于 2013-12-12 18:05:27

乐乐又有时间啦。哈哈
希望工作进展顺利!

Lis-Y 发表于 2013-12-12 19:57:44

求大神指点，我输入http://www.copyscape.com/， 只出现了”Search for copies of your page on the web.“， 并没有”Paste text or URL“，没法检测文章啊，这是为何？:(

Lis-Y 发表于 2013-12-12 20:07:44

多谢。我是用相关主题文章的评论拼凑改写成文章的，能否在问下，文章的评论应该也会被谷歌收录，但是应该不会跟文章一样那么精准吧？我需要大动干戈改写吗？文章的目的只是为了让google判断为原创而已

月光飞燕 发表于 2013-12-12 20:16:44

Lis-Y 发表于 2013-12-12 20:07 static/image/common/back.gif
多谢。我是用相关主题文章的评论拼凑改写成文章的，能否在问下，文章的评论应该也会被谷歌收录，但是应该不 ...

实际上文章与文章评论在google看来是一个整体（都在一个页面上），评论可以看成文章的一部分，同样影响着单个页面的关键词密度

baron 发表于 2013-12-12 20:35:22

这个改写水平高，要多学习，多看这个牛人的帖子

Lis-Y 发表于 2013-12-12 20:38:02

月光飞燕 发表于 2013-12-12 20:16 static/image/common/back.gif
实际上文章与文章评论在google看来是一个整体（都在一个页面上），评论可以看成文章的一部分，同样影响着 ...

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追寻梦的帅 发表于 2013-12-12 22:05:48

从乐版这学到很多，支持下乐老师。
好久没见你在论坛里啦

will86 发表于 2013-12-12 22:14:14

楼上点评很有帮助，多谢

晕蛋疯亲 发表于 2013-12-12 23:22:07

:lol乐乐出品，必属精品
话说乐乐还在咖啡厅码的字么 - -;P

weibob168 发表于 2013-12-13 00:10:30

我还是有点不太懂，乐乐改 是一个工具吗？是自动改写还是人工的啊？

327949734 发表于 2013-12-13 09:13:03




乐乐版主很牛x呀，呵呵，想知道，你这个该怎么学习呀，先后顺序，还有我的英语水平4级而已，可以学好么

jx007888 发表于 2013-12-13 13:25:16

改写的不错啊                        

jiangqqqq 发表于 2013-12-13 19:59:44

VERY GOOD AND NICE TO READ IT ,THANK YOU

327949734 发表于 2013-12-13 22:12:17

327949734 发表于 2013-12-13 09:13 static/image/common/back.gif
乐乐版主很牛x呀，呵呵，想知道，你这个该怎么学习呀，先后顺序，还有我的英语水平4级而已，可以学好么
...

请问可以试听一下么，呵呵

沁泉 发表于 2013-12-13 22:33:54

最近也开始对改写感兴趣了:D

xz21st 发表于 2014-1-10 14:46:19

高级改写版（结合改写分析工具结果，自由发挥）

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