乐乐 发表于 2013-12-16 14:16:52

【每日改写练习】2013.12.16

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5 Important Rules in Website Design

When it comes to your website, extra attention should be paid to every minute detail to make sure it performs optimally to serve its purpose. Here are seven important rules of thumb to observe to make sure your website performs well.

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1. 简易改写版（几乎不需要英语基础。。。）<blockquote>Whenever it involves website of yours, extra attention needs to be paid to every minute detail to ensure it works ideally to offer its purpose. Listed here are seven rules of thumb to look at to ensure your website works perfectly.2. 中级改写版（结合乐乐改21改点以及口诀）<blockquote>When it comes to their websites, webmasters should pay extra attention to every minute detail which makes sure that the purpose of websites will be served optimally. To make sure their websites perform well, here are 7 rules of thumb that is important to observe.3. 高级改写版（结合改写分析工具结果，自由发挥）In order to make sure every website performs optimally to serve its purpose, webmasters should pay extra attention to details. Here are the 7 rules of thumb that you can give a try.通过copyscape检测

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未来式 发表于 2013-12-16 14:19:05

抢个沙发，支撑下。。。

Danmary61 发表于 2013-12-16 14:53:06

支持一下，英文写作是这行最重要的基础工具没有之一。简洁的表达方式容易让阅读者多停留一会儿。

晕蛋疯亲 发表于 2013-12-16 17:22:51

:lol不知道上次那个老外还会不会来 - -

肥草 发表于 2013-12-16 17:51:45

很好，很强大。继续练习英语翻译

yblfss 发表于 2013-12-16 19:31:18

晕蛋疯亲 发表于 2013-12-16 17:22 static/image/common/back.gif
不知道上次那个老外还会不会来 - -

:o，什么老外啊，不明白

baron 发表于 2013-12-16 20:21:20

进来学习学习，方法比努力更重要

沁泉 发表于 2013-12-16 23:16:28

改写勉强能读得通，但如果熟悉了老外的思维模式，就会容易很多

jiangqqqq 发表于 2013-12-17 00:10:42

认真练习，争取每天都有所进步

ccz2013 发表于 2013-12-17 10:55:51

很不错~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~:victory::victory::victory:

yxadm 发表于 2013-12-17 13:33:59

没工具改写起来真叫一个累啊



baron 发表于 2013-12-17 21:49:17

改写真不容易，还是去用工具

yangjianfeng 发表于 2013-12-17 21:58:25

yblfss 发表于 2013-12-16 19:31 static/image/common/back.gif
，什么老外啊，不明白

呵呵，你猜。。。。。。。。。

amnoob 发表于 2013-12-22 23:32:31

路过赚个T币 。。。。                                                                     

wangbenxing 发表于 2013-12-23 20:32:11

学习下,多学习会笔下行云流水

心晴 发表于 2014-1-3 11:43:46

看起来挺不错的。。如果英语这关过了就很好了。。

xz21st 发表于 2014-1-10 13:43:59

改写分析工具结果

88usd 发表于 2014-3-22 17:26:51

语言是个大门槛啊 :dizzy:

421031488 发表于 2015-1-2 18:41:06

乐乐改21改点以及口诀是什么？这个是什么工具啊？

4224611 发表于 2015-1-4 16:21:44

赞，要好好学习                                    
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