leileigai review + 第一次高级改写完美通过copyscape
本帖最后由 qiuxiangkai 于 2014-1-4 20:20 编辑前几天购买乐乐改，十多个小时的视频花几天时间陆陆续续看完了，在此与大家分享一下学习体验。
由于我具备还可以的英语基础，高中时的英语老师很棒，所以语法较扎实，且曾经是电子工程师，整天要看枯燥的英文datasheet, 乐乐老师看了我原创的文章后并不推荐我学习乐改，说可能对我的帮助不会很明显。后来在论坛里逛了一段时间，看到月光强烈推荐乐改，加上对自己的写作水平并不自信（写的文章不够地道），再次和乐乐老师沟通后决定学习乐乐改。乐老师推荐直接从高级改写开始。
其实教程里几句话就把高级改写的精华讲清楚了：那就是借助乐乐改写辅助工具把一句话里要传递的核。信息（名词）提炼出来，然后自由发挥。这也是我个人喜欢的风格。
21个改点：对我来说也算是个知识的补充，高级改写配合这些改点，会很简单。英语一般的童鞋用中级初级改写也不会有多大的难度。乐乐改的一个好处是：边改边学，越改越好。结合词汇搭配库，可以积累很多动词副词的用法。词汇搭配库貌似是乐乐老师自己整理的，无法想象工作量有多大。
模块化教程：把一句话的重点揪出来（就是去掉修辞的主谓宾），其实就已经掌握了一半以上的意思了，剩下的都是修饰动词名词或者句子而已。我一直以来多多少少有这样的意识，就是所谓的语感吧，但没能系统地概括出来。此外，模块化教程能帮助提高阅读速度，用里面提到的方式确实能改变我们国人阅读英语的方式和习惯，当然我现在还做不到，得慢慢来。
今天下午花了1小时35分钟把乐乐昨天推荐的一篇阅读教程改写了一下，用高级改写的方法，结合了教程里好几个改点。文章大约1000个字左右。而我自己写700个字的原创文章大约花费3个小时。
原文地址http://www.affilorama.com/blog/get-banned-as-amazon-affiliate
写完后充了10美刀到copyscape账户进行检查，意料中通过。今后目标是1小时能改写出1000字难度相似的文章，且每天能改写出4篇的高质量的文章。
本人是affiliate marketing的新手，还请大家多指教。谢谢。
8 ways to be kicked out from Amazon affiliate program
The Amazon Associates Program has been an great affiliate program with amazing reputation in the market for a long time. Lots ofpeople love it, while some hate it. But as amatter of fact, you can make serious decent money from it no matter how much marketing experience you’ve got.
Nevertheless, you can be kicked out of the game ruthlessly by Amazon if you do the wrong thing as an affiliate. Your account will be suspended forever in this case, together with the possibility of making money from Amazon again. Most people will try their best to avoid getting banned by Amazon. However, I like to offer some ‘useful’ tips here if you wantto be banned:
Ignore the Operating AgreementThe Operating Agreement of the Associates Program has outlined the conditions and terms for affiliates who participate in the program. But, how many people would read that?Not reading this agreement and having no fucking idea of those terms and conditions is undoubtedly a certain way to get banned. The terms are out there in plain English that even those who isn’t from English-speaking country can understand it without anytrouble. If you don’t follow those guidelines laid down by Amazon, you will probably get banned in a short time.
Own more than one accountAmazon sellers are expected to have only one account by the authority. Creating more than one account will bring you to the ‘hotbox’ in no time. Some business owners could request more than just one account for a particular reason, while following the terms and conditions of Amazon.
Post Your Affiliate Links on the Sites that don’t belong to youAmazon affiliates are supposed to post their affiliate links only on their own web sites. While those who post their affiliate links anywhere such as blog comments or forums hoping to earn extra money often get banned. If you have any spammy behavior, Amazon will kick you out of the game.
Copy Amazon Reviews Product reviews onAmazon are for potential customers to read. If you want to be banned, just copy those reviews to your sites as if they are written by yourself. You might not be punished by luck when using a picture of product from Amazon on your site,but stealing those product reviews is another thing that would get you banned for sure.
Not tell your readers that You Are an Amazon AffiliateIf you try to hide from visitors of your site that you’re an Amazon affiliate, you are just moving your ass to get banned. It’s Amazon’s rules that on every page of your site your must state the fact of your participation in the associates program. Placing some text in the footer of your site which tell you are an affiliate of Amazon and you would earn a commission if they purchase through the affiliate link on your site is considered to be smart. Leave this important announcement out and Amazon will definitely punish you as soon as it can.
Link from Sites containing Explicitly sexual or Violent contentAmazon doesn’t likethis kind of sites. You will get banned for sure if you try to promote Amazon products on those sexual or violent sites. Of course, there are more types of sites on Amazon’s blacklist, Including but not limited to the sites that violating the Children’s Online Privacy Protection Act,promoting discrimination, ontaining defamatory materials or other illegal activities. Check out Amazon’s Operating Agreement to read to whole blacklist of site that Amazon doesn’t like.
Promote products that are counterfeitIf you have any idea of selling Christian Louboutin shoes for a dead low price to make a quick money from Amazon, you are totally wrong.Instead, you might be banned sooner than you expect. Amazon won’t treat you as its friend if you promote any kind of counterfeit products which violate intellectual property rights.
Auto-TagWhen a visitor of your site clicks your affiliate link, you can get your commission if he makes a purchase on Amazon inthe next 24 hours. This is one good thing of Amazon associate program. But some affiliates would play a trick on this: they try to auto-tag visitors on their site to generate clicks even if the visitors never click anything so that they might get commissions. Amazon will see through this little trick and ban you in notime. Sometimes, you might fall into trouble by using a terrible worpress themeor an iframe, even if you don’t want to be shady. Make sure to stay away from wordpress themes from untrusted publishers, ‘cause they may have been tampered with. Wordpress theme provided by the AffiloTheme are proved to be reliable andperfect for affiliate marketing.
Promote Amazon product via paid search advertisement without permissionIf you bring sales to Amazon in right way, you will get paid by Amazon with no doubt. Always remember to ask for Amazon’s permission before you buy paid search traffic to sell anything. You might be lucky occasionally but not all the time. Don’t try to fool Amazon. You will also be considered violating Amazon’s Ts & Cs if you are caught redirecting links that lead to Amazon product page.
Amazon will always get you if you try to be shady. Please do the completely opposite of these advice listed above and you will be totally fine. Click here if you want to learn more about prohibited seller activities and actions.
If you are newbie in affiliate marketing, make sure to learn AffiloBlueprint on how to earn money by selling products of other people. Wonder if Amazon is right for you? ‘Why you should consider Amazon associates’ from Sam might be a great guide for you.Are you an affiliate from Amazon? We love to hear your story about your affiliate marketing experience. Leave a comment and let us know your thoughts.
请问下高级乐改多少钱？我英文也有一定基础，老外正常语速没问题。不过对乐乐的教程也有兴趣，楼主可以说下价格吗
我英语过了4级，但是写作方面真的不怎么地，感觉词汇量也不够，也想参加乐改试试
楼主也是电子工程师。我也是，在外企就职啊，呵呵。相似的经历啊
我英语过了4级，但是写作方面真的不怎么地，感觉词汇量也不够，也想参加乐改
will86 发表于 2014-1-4 20:22 static/image/common/back.gif
请问下高级乐改多少钱？我英文也有一定基础，老外正常语速没问题。不过对乐乐的教程也有兴趣，楼主可以说下 ...
乐乐有三套教程
1. dofast 翻译写作 600
2. lelegai 改写阅读 1000
3. 52fast 口语听力 2000
乐乐改写教程
新用户 1000 RMB
dofast 老用户 700
*优惠活动 lelegai + dofast = 1100
richboy518 发表于 2014-1-4 23:39 static/image/common/back.gif
我英语过了4级，但是写作方面真的不怎么地，感觉词汇量也不够，也想参加乐改
...
多积累动词即可
标记一下 以后向乐乐老师学习
看到各位基础很好，好生羡慕。。。语法学的不行，可能要重新学一下
leadsec7766 发表于 2014-1-8 22:40 static/image/common/back.gif
看到各位基础很好，好生羡慕。。。语法学的不行，可能要重新学一下
你的头像很可爱:):):):):):)
:lol 已购买教程 正在努力学习中
打算购买教程。非常期待
语法错误还是有不少啊，第一行里就有 “an great affiliate program”这样的低级错误。
楼主不会用Word的拼写检查和易改软件吗？
易改软件 不错，爽爽爽爽爽
zhuomuniao 发表于 2014-7-20 21:53 static/image/common/back.gif
语法错误还是有不少啊，第一行里就有 “an great affiliate program”这样的低级错误。
楼主不会用Word的 ...
小错误无法避免，这个文章我又不用来发表，就没有核对。
做国外还是得有较强的英语能力呀。。
页:
[1]