请高手帮我译一下

guoguo6699

谢谢你,我已经收到了支票，但是支票地址上还有一个小小的错误，请帮我更正一下


试了几个翻译软件,总觉不地道.

妃子笑

地址错误也能收到？ 可以收到的话，就没什么大问题啊！

I`ve received the cheque but, the address on the check with a small error.

Can you fix it for me? Thanks.

alienmare

or

Hi,

I have received the cheque, thank you. But there was an error with the address, can you please correct it for me? The correct information are:

[Correct Address]

Regards,
[YourName]

guoguo6699

谢谢两位:

supercrasy

原帖由 guoguo6699 于 2007-6-3 16:00 发表
谢谢你,我已经收到了支票，但是支票地址上还有一个小小的错误，请帮我更正一下


试了几个翻译软件,总觉不地道.

楼上两位都翻译的不错。

来个更地道一点的：
Recent payment was received with many thanks.

But it seems that the address shown on the cheque has a discrepancy with the information I submitted.

Would you mind to cancel the original one and re-send the correct one in order that our bank can process it properly?

I look forward to hearing from you.