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【每日改写练习】2013.12.13

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发表于 2013-12-13 16:13:10 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
本帖最后由 乐乐 于 2013-12-13 16:16 编辑

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camera case

Anyone with a camera needs to have a case. Though some cameras are very small, they still could use some protection. The camera that I have is very awkward in shape, but I wouldn't exchange it for any other type.  

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1. 简易改写版(几乎不需要英语基础。。。)
  1. Anyone using a camera should have a case. Although some cameras are really small, they however should use some protection. The camera which I have is really embarrassing in shape, however I would not trade it for any other type.
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2. 中级改写版(结合乐乐改21改点以及口诀)
这个例子,包括以后的例子里,大家一定要记住:
定语从句一定要掌握好,改写里很重要,不管是否有乐乐改教程或者dofast教程,改写者一定要掌握。
  1. A case is needed by anyone who has a camera. Some protection could still be used for mall ones, though they are really very small. I have a camera whose shape is very awkward, but there’s no any other type of camera that I will exchange it for.
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3. 高级改写版(结合改写分析工具结果,自由发挥)
  1. Do you have a case for your camera? It’s highly recommended that every camera owner should have a case, even for those really small cameras. For me, I have an “ugly” camera but I like it so much that I won’t exchange it for any other cameras.
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通过copyscape检测

简易改写检测 通过
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中级改写,高级改写检测 通过
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发表于 2013-12-13 16:25:50 | 显示全部楼层
勉強しました I've learnt a lot thx
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发表于 2013-12-13 16:56:40 | 显示全部楼层
简易改写版居然能通过, copyscape也太....

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copyscape说能通过还是能通过的哈,虽然叫简易改写,但是和TBS还是完全不同的  发表于 2013-12-13 20:24
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发表于 2013-12-13 20:11:54 | 显示全部楼层
简易版过不了谷歌,单纯的替换关键词,谷歌能识别

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he is a boy 替换成 she is a girl. 不认为google会认为这是一句话,里面还有有些技巧的  发表于 2013-12-13 20:45
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发表于 2013-12-13 20:33:51 | 显示全部楼层
怎么不上QQ了啊

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在啊,要是没有回复再给我发一下消息,有时候消息可能没有处理到 不好意思啊  发表于 2013-12-13 20:38
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发表于 2013-12-13 20:42:21 | 显示全部楼层
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发表于 2013-12-13 22:12:34 | 显示全部楼层
掩面,俺需要回炉重新学习英语
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