本帖最后由 心晴 于 2014-5-13 23:21 编辑
如果这样可以的话，以后都这样改写了。请大家帮我参考参考哦，之前用的简易改写，但是朋友说不行，语言不通，读起来拗口，这次这次用高级改写，因为是第一次高级改写，自己还拿不准，谢谢各位了。
My friend has cooked for a lot of people, run a pop-up restaurant with a lot of delicious food and impressed dinners over his career which began at last year. He told me why he can do such a fantastic food as the Cuisinart Mixer rendered greate service on doing food. Now you know how much a suitable Mixer mean to you when cooking in the kitchen. That’s very good at making pie or beating up eggs or mixing cake mixtures. It is highly important to mix with the suitable Mixer. So what’s the suitable Mixer? My mother works 60-plus hours a week still find a way to do things for their families. How? They do it with the Cuisinart Mixer that can save a good deal of time.
Cuisinart Mixers whether the hand mixers or the stand mixers are useful piece of equipment for the kitchen.
It is very practical and handy of making food as its real-life efficiency with a wonderful powerful motor. It handles many heavy icing and dough and other food. In particular, It is very useful when I want to make a lot and using materials that varies widely in textures; The truly thin mixtures become the truly thick ones. The slow start prevents flour-type ingredients everywhere on the kitchen counter top, then I wouldn’t have to clean and do other boring stuff. Saves energh, saves time, relatively, we may have more time to be engaged in more areas. Oh, really convenient
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