麻烦哪位英语高手帮忙翻译一句纯正点的谢谢

rr2005

你好
  你们公司上个月发给我的支票我至今仍然没有收到，由于我现在马上即将搬进新家了，所以能否麻烦你重发一次支票到我如下的新地址。谢谢。

中国VIP俱乐部

原帖由 rr2005 于 2006-8-19 01:15 发表
你好
  你们公司上个月发给我的支票我至今仍然没有收到，由于我现在马上即将搬进新家了，所以能否麻烦你重发一次支票到我如下的新地址。谢谢。

the check you issued last month has not arrived yet till now.

as I am going to move to a new house, would you please kindly send out the check again, to the following address?

++++++++++++++++++++

thanks

wk25410790

翻的不错~~~

段续风

热心助人＋

supercrasy

原帖由 中国VIP俱乐部 于 2006-9-14 17:51 发表


the check you issued last month has not arrived yet till now.

as I am going to move to a new house, would you please kindly send out the check again, to the following address?

+++++++++++++ ...

更地道和直接一点的翻译如下:

Dear Sir/Madam:

We haven't received your last payment.

We will move to a new premises therefore please re-send the last and future payment to the following address.

We are looking forward to hearing from you.

Regards

XXX

好心助人并无心冒犯

段续风

supercrasy 翻译的时候还是最好说明是 支票没有收到。 另外please re-send the last and future payment ，这个地方也应注意一下动宾搭配。 last payment 可以说resend, future payment 说resend 就不合适了。

感谢各位积极帮助他人

supercrasy

原帖由 段续风 于 2006-10-8 17:11 发表
supercrasy 翻译的时候还是最好说明是 支票没有收到。 另外please re-send the last and future payment ，这个地方也应注意一下动宾搭配。 last payment 可以说resend, future payment 说resend 就不合适了。
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Jessen88

Dear Sir/lady
i have not recived the check that it's send by your company last month,because i'll remove my house,so kindly pls re-send the check to my new address,the new address detail as below:


looking forward you kindly reply.
thanks&Best Regards

段续风

that it's send  改成 that was sent

等待

Dear Sir/Madam
I have not yet received the check issued last month from your company .As I will  move into a new house, sorry to trouble you to send the check to the following  address:

Best Regards!

Yours sincerely
XXXXX

[ 本帖最后由 等待 于 2006-10-15 19:27 编辑 ]

段续风

原帖由 等待 于 2006-10-15 19:16 发表
Dear Sir/Madam
I have not yet received the check issued last month from your company .As I will  move into a new house, sorry to trouble you to send the check to the following  address:

Best  ...

不错，再接再厉