乐乐 发表于 2013-12-13 16:13:10

【每日改写练习】2013.12.13

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camera case

Anyone with a camera needs to have a case. Though some cameras are very small, they still could use some protection. The camera that I have is very awkward in shape, but I wouldn't exchange it for any other type.

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1. 简易改写版(几乎不需要英语基础。。。)Anyone using a camera should have a case. Although some cameras are really small, they however should use some protection. The camera which I have is really embarrassing in shape, however I would not trade it for any other type.2. 中级改写版(结合乐乐改21改点以及口诀)
这个例子,包括以后的例子里,大家一定要记住:
定语从句一定要掌握好,改写里很重要,不管是否有乐乐改教程或者dofast教程,改写者一定要掌握。A case is needed by anyone who has a camera. Some protection could still be used for mall ones, though they are really very small. I have a camera whose shape is very awkward, but there’s no any other type of camera that I will exchange it for.3. 高级改写版(结合改写分析工具结果,自由发挥)Do you have a case for your camera? It’s highly recommended that every camera owner should have a case, even for those really small cameras. For me, I have an “ugly” camera but I like it so much that I won’t exchange it for any other cameras.通过copyscape检测

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conviction5800 发表于 2013-12-13 16:25:50

勉強しました I've learnt a lot thx

luguokankan 发表于 2013-12-13 16:56:40

简易改写版居然能通过, copyscape也太....

fineday 发表于 2013-12-13 20:11:54

简易版过不了谷歌,单纯的替换关键词,谷歌能识别

xiao9 发表于 2013-12-13 20:33:51

{:14_1224:} 怎么不上QQ了啊

xiao9 发表于 2013-12-13 20:42:21

xiao9 发表于 2013-12-13 20:33 static/image/common/back.gif
怎么不上QQ了啊

猪蹄{:14_1226:}{:14_1226:}{:14_1226:}

大虫子 发表于 2013-12-13 22:12:34

掩面,俺需要回炉重新学习英语
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